Is my writing good or not?

You really should proof read before you post anything, there are a lot of grammatical errors and misspellings. The dialogue is interesting and at a good pace, but a little cliche, I think it would be interesting to hear Lana direct some insults at Fiona as well. The last paragraph is way too rushed. Rather than her thinking "random thoughts", have her think about the fight or why she and Fiona were fighting in the first place. It has potential though.